The animation was great but I didn't like the story much. Was a bit creepy in a way.
Not Very Good
You are brilliant at effects animation but average to below average at character animation and really bad at story telling and comedy. You need to stop looking at the story lines for fantasy videogames and other cartoons and start reading some books. Don't give away everything about Bitey's personality in voice over. That's so amateurish. Your cartoon doesn't say anything about the real world which would be fine if it was entertaining but its not. The animation didn't even save you in this one. It was easy. I could have done it. It's good for Newgrounds but you're trying to make a film.
Here's what you need to do to get better.
Read some classic books.
Watch some classic films (not just animated ones).
Do life drawing.
Read some philosophy.
Get off your computer and have some real life experience.
Keep a diary.
Do all that and you could be really good. I have high hopes for you.
Here's what YOU need to do to get better:
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